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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The pie chart gives information on UAE government spending in 2000. The total budget was

AED 315 billion. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and

make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words

model answer:

The graph tells us about the budget of the UAE government in 2000. In general, the most

important targets were social security, health, and education.

The biggest slice of the pie chart is taken up by social security including pensions,

employment assistance and other benefits which made up slightly under one-third of total

expenditure. Health and personal social services was the second highest budget cost.

Hospital and medical services accounted for AED 53 billion, or about 15% of the budget.

Education cost UAE AED 38 billion which comprises almost 12% of the whole budget. The

government spent about seven percent of revenue on debt, and roughly similar amounts

went towards defence (AED 22 billion) and law and order (AED 17 billion).

Spending on housing, transport and industry totalled AED 37 billion. Finally, other

expenditure accounted for AED 23 billion.

All in all, the bulk of UAE government spending goes on social welfare and health. However,

education, defence, and law and order are also major areas of spending.

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نکته بسیار مهم در این نوع نمودارها این است که باید بر روی آمار توجه بسیاری داشته باشید. مثلا

اگر از درصد استفاده شده است در جواب باید از لغاتی چون large/small/higher/lower percentage

of … استفاده کنید ولی اگر از عدد استفاده شده است آنوقت باید از توضیحاتی

مثل many/more/most/few/fewer… استفاده کنید.

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