نمونه ای از نمودارهای میله ای در رایتینگ آکادمیک به همراه حل آن

 استاد حامد رفیعی دکتری ادبیات انگلیسی و نویسنده کتاب رایتینگ آیلتس

اشاره:

در این قسمت با نمونه ای دیگر از نمودارهای میله ای و حل آن آشنا می شوید.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The bar chart shows the number of visitors to three London Museums between 2007 and

2012. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and

make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words

model answer:

The bar chart illustrates information about how many people per year visited three London

museums over six-year period from 2007 to 2012.

Overall, what stands out from the graph is there was gradual upward trend in the number

of visitors of the National Gallery, which became the most popular museum from being at

last place, while the Victoria and Albert Museum followed the opposite trend. In detail, in

the first two years of the period, the number of visitors of Victoria and Albert Museum

remained stable at 13.5 millions, and then fell to 9 millions in 2010, while that of British

Museum, dropped significantly by 50%, from 12 millions to 6 millions and remained at this

level in 2009.

However, there was gradual upward trend in the number of visitors of both British Museum

and Victoria and Albert from 2010 to 2012, the former number doubled and the latter rised

by more than 50%, finishing at 14.5 and 40 millions respectively. In addition, there was

significant increase of the number of visitors of National Gallery over the whole six-year

period, the figure finishing at almost 16 millions.

(184 words)

نکته مهم برای این بخش این است که هیچوقت از نظر شخصی خود برای نمودارها استفاده نکنید.

شما بایستی تمامی آنچیزی را که در نمودار آمده است توصیف کنید بدون اینکه توضیح بیشتری در

مورد آن دهید. به یاد داشته باشید که بخش اول رایتینگ آکادمیک در واقع توانایی شما در ارائه آمار

را می سنجد نه قوه ی نتیجه گیری شخصیتان را.


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